I marked up edits to four chapters, so I'm now up to Chapter 19. I'm doing child care tomorrow, so I'll input them the day after that.

It's going to be an exciting round of edits because there's actually some poetry in these chapters, and I am really, really not a poet. It's just doggerel--the kind of poetry that exists so that you remember things better, like "Three in the head, you know they're dead." When I was younger, I used to be able to kick out that sort of thing fairly easily (at length, even), but apparently it's one of those things you lose as you age. Or as you stop reading poetry, because you are no longer in college fulfilling the requirements to graduate as an English major. One or the other....